Can anyone tell me if this translation is accurate?

I’m doing this as a favor. I barely know Italian. I essentially google translated and edited to be readable. Are there any mistakes or problems here?

Original Italian text:

I Renegade Soundwave furono fra i protagonisti della prima stagione dei rave britannici. I provocanti hit Kray Twins (Left, 1987) e Cocaine Sex guadagnarono loro la fama di teppisti della discoteca. Fondendo dub, hip hop e dance-rock in un siluro martellante di suoni e rumori, i Renegade Soundwave imposero un atteggiamento duro e sfrontato in un mondo che era vissuto di atteggiamenti effeminati e di grossolano glam. Dopo la parentesi dei singoli per la Mute Biting My Nails (1988), che plagia Knock On Wood di AMi Stewart, The Phantom (1989) e Space Gladiator (1989), pervennero al loro massimo successo, Probably A Robbery, con tanto di sirene della polizia.

Se Soundclash (Mute, 1989), fungeva soltanto da contenitore di hit, il doppio dell'anno dopo, In Dub (Mute, 1990), fu una delle pietre miliari del techno d'arte.

Biting My Nails (Mute, 1994) si avvicina al formato della canzone raffinata, sensuale, cosmico, funk e psichedelico. Brixton e Bubbaluba sono le altre gaie danze di Howyoudoin (mute, 1994), remixato in chiave dub su Next Chapter Of Dub).

RSW 1987-1995 (Mute, 2001) is a double-CD anthology.

My translation

Renegade Soundwave were among the protagonists of the first stage of British rave. The provocative hit Kray Twins (Left, 1987) and Cocaine Sex earned them a reputation as disco hooligans. Merging dub, hip hop and dance-rock in a torpedo pounding with sounds and noises, Renegade Soundwave imposed a hard and brazen attitude on a world still living in effeminate and crass glam. After the Mute singles Biting My Nails (1988) (which plagiarized Knock On Wood by AMi Stewart), The Phantom (1989) and Space Gladiator (1989), they reached their maximum success, Probably A Robbery, complete with police sirens.

If Soundclash (Mute, 1989), served only as a compilation of hits, the following years release, In Dub (Mute, 1990), was one of the milestones of art techno.

Biting My Nails (Mute, 1994) approaches the refined, sensual, cosmic, funky and psychedelic song format. Brixton and Bubbaluba are the other gay dances of Howyoudoin (mute, 1994), which was remixed into dub style on The Next Chapter Of Dub.

RSW 1987-1995 (Mute, 2001) is a double-CD anthology.

Submitted October 20, 2019 at 10:28AM by NYCinthefuture https://ift.tt/2J7Oksx